English 104-22 and 104-25
College Writing and Rhetoric

Instructor: Gordon P. Thomas.
E-Mail: thomas@uidaho.edu.
Home Page: http://www.uidaho.edu/~thomas/

Some Links Useful for this Course:

bulletThe news group for this course (uidaho.class.eng.104.gt). Available only to users on the Univ. of Idaho campus.
bulletThe Web Site for your textbook CyberReader.
bulletCyberspace: The New Frontier. This web site,which is mentioned on page 53 of CyberReader, is actually located right here at the Univ. of Idaho in the Computer Science department. It accompanied a series of lectures on cyberspace given a few years ago. One of the most popular speaker was John Perry Barlow, who held the crowd spellbound for a couple hours at the Admin. Auditorium; you'll hear a lot more about Barlow in other readings in CyberReader. Here are some other links mentioned at the end of Chapter One of CyberReader:
bulletHyperreal.
bulletThe Voice of the Shuttle: The Technology of Writing.
bulletHot Virtual Reality Sites.
bulletNanotechnology on the WWW.
bulletEnviroLink.
bulletAnd here are the web pages of the authors that you read in Chapter One:
bulletMichael Heim.
bulletBenjamin Woolley.
bulletHoward Rheingold.
bulletDouglas Rushkoff.
bulletSome On-Line Writing Centers (OWLs) at other universities:
bulletThe Rensselaer Writing Center, the writing center and Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute (RPI) at Troy, New York.
bulletThe Dakota State University Online Writing Lab.
bulletThe Undergraduate Writing Center at the University of Texas, Austin.
bulletThe On-Line Writing Center (OWL) at Purdue University, Lafayette, Indiana.
bulletThe Writery at the University of Missouri.
bulletRoane State Community College Owl.
bulletBowling Green University Writing Center.
bulletMichigan Tech. University Writing Center.
bulletThe University of Michigan OWL.
bulletTaft Community College Online Writing Lab.
bulletWriting Online Resource Directory.
bulletThe United States Holocaust Memorial Museum Home Page
bulletMemory Made Manifest: The United States Holocaust Memorial Museum by Laura Dove, a long essay with photographs and diagrams about how Americans have regarded the Holocaust since 1945 and how those feelings eventually resulted in the construction of the Holocaust Museum.
bulletCybrary of the Holocaust, a site with lots of links about the Holocaust.
bulletThe Simon Wisenthall Center in Los Angeles.
bulletsoc.culture.jewish. This Usenet group discusses issues concerning Judaism as it's currently practiced in the U.S. Look especially for postings called FAQs (or Frequently Asked Questions). On this newsgroup, someone (usually Daniel P. Faigin) makes a pretty serious effort to answer these (you may have to go back and look at earlier postings--this group is very active). Most of the postings deal with questions that are really interesting only to religious Jews; there are many differences of opinion between Orthodox, Reform, and Conservative Jews. You cannot post to this Newsgroup from one of the labs at the University of Idaho, but you can read what is posted.
bulletInformation about Art Spiegelman's Maus on CD-ROM
bulletLithograph by Spiegelman related to his Thinking About Making Maus. You interpret it.
bulletMore Information About the Holocaust
bullet"Art Spiegelman's MAUS: Working-Through The Trauma of the Holocaust," critical article on Maus, fairly long with lots of graphics (takes a while to load). This is part of page done by Robert S. Leventhal, who is a professor of German at the University of Virginia. It is part of a much larger project called "Responses to the Holocaust: A Hypermedia Sourcebook for the Humanities," which has many other links to sources about the Holocaust.
bulletThe Virtual Library - Religion. This source is an excellent place to get a quick introduction to the major religions of the world, including Judaism
bulletInformation about Schindler's List, the movie, including reviews and photographs.
bulletThe news group soc.culture.jewish.holocaust. People make contributions about the topic of the Holocaust. You cannot post to this Newsgroup from one of the labs at the University of Idaho, but you can read what is posted.
bulletHOLOCAUST DENIERS: Greg Raven's Home Page. Treat anything you read on this thread with GREAT CAUTION. Greg Raven is a Holocaust denier or "revisionist," as he calls himself. He is the associate editor of The Journal of Historical Review and so is connected at least indirectly to the Institute of Historical Review, which publishes that journal. However, he insists that this is simply his own personal home page. The pamphlets from the institute and the article from The Journal of Historical Review are very slick and will appear to be very scholarly and well researched. In fact, they are very carefully written, even more so than they might first appear, because in spite of their objective and scholarly appearance, they are filled with misleading and false information about the Holocaust. You may wonder how anyone can make the argument that the Germans did not have a policy of genocide toward the Jews and that the numbers of people who were killed has been greatly exggerated. Well, read a few of these articles carefully, and you'll begin to see the technique: very careful presentation of detailed information, most of which is true (toward the beginning of the article), and then the gradual introduction of a few facts that are simply false or very misleading. Then a subtle argument demonstrating that there exists a huge conspiracy to deceive everyone about the real nature of the Holocaust. The best guide to this tricky territory that I know of is Deborah Lipstadt's book Denying the Holocaust (see the interesting review of this book by Brian Siano in Skeptic). So don't use this material in your own scholarly work, unless you're working to debunk the deniers themselves (a pretty tricky business, as Lipstadt demonstrates). See the Nizkor Project for further information on the revisionists. You may also want to check out Ken McVay's home page; he is the director of the Nizkor Project.
bulletHolocaust information from the gopher at Nysernet.
bulletSome comments by my students on Lanzmann's interview of Abraham Bomba in Shoah.
bulletLinks to information about Schindler's List, the movie and Schindler's List, the book.
bulletHolocaust Pictures Exhibition, a site that displays pictures of victims and scenes from the Holocaust.
bulletWord War II. Links to sources about World War II in general.

Course Goals: English 104 is an introductory composition course, designed to improve your skills in persuasive, expository writing, the sort you will be doing in other courses in college and in many jobs. Sometimes this kind of writing is called transactional writing; it is used to transact something-persuade and inform a reasonably well-educated audience, conduct business, evaluate, review, or explain a complex process, procedure, or event.

All your assignments in this course will be built around two complex topics, which I selected because (a) they are important for any educated person and (b) I myself am interested about them and I think you will be too. The first concerns what has been broadly termed "cyberspace"-the term that usually refers to communication on the Internet. Actually, cyberspace has probably existed since the 1840's when it was first possible to send information electronically (by telegraph), but it has only become clear in the past few years how significant this development was, for cyberspace has greatly expanded in the past few years because of computer technology. Previously, it was only very large organizations, such as national broadcasting companies, banks, newspapers, and so forth, that could use cyberspace, and it was not very convenient. Now the ability to send electronic messages and even publish information electronically are available to ordinary people. All these developments carry significant implications for personal literary-reading and writing by the individual. Since this is a course in a particular type of literacy-writing for college-I have selected as one of our texts the book CyberReader, which is a collection of readings on the questions of cyberspace. Three of our major assignments will be drawn from this book, and I will be asking you to do carry out your research and writing activities on the computer. We will learn a good deal about the World Wide Web (WWW), that aspect of the Internet that makes it possible to send and receive graphics and text.

The second topic we will explore is the Holocaust, the nearly successful attempt by the Nazi government during World War II to exterminate the Jews, Gypsies, and other groups it thought to be undesirable. We will do this by reading two very accessible texts about this period, Art Spiegelman's Maus, which is in comic-book format, and Elie Wiesel's short autobiographical novel, Night, with which many of you may already be familiar. Three of your major papers will be based on these books. I will be asking you to inform yourself about this period in general so that you can write knowledgeably about how well these books describe the experience of some of the victims and explore the relevant issues of the Holocaust in general. So, all these assignments will require some research. We will look at some films in class (but I will not be showing you anything that is excessively graphic), and I will assign you some readings that will be in books that will be on reserve in the library. In addition, we will learn how to find sources for this topic on the Internet.

By organizing the course in this way, we will be able to learn something significant about our world, in addition to learning and putting into practice the principles of college writing and rhetoric.

Requirements: There will be six major writing assignments. Here are brief description of the major assignments (more detailed descriptions will follow):

WA 1: Respond to a reading or a set of readings about cyberspace. Length: at least well on to the third page (800 - 1000 words)

WA 2: Analyze or critique an issue related to cyberspace. Length: on to the fourth page (900 - 1,100 words).

WA 3: Analyze on aspect of the book Maus. Length: 4-5 pages (1,000 - 1,250 words).

WA 4: Critique an aspect of the book Night. Length: 4-6 pages (1,000 - 1,250 words).

WA 5: Write a comparison/contrast paper of Maus and Night. Length: 5-7 pages (1,250 - 1,700 words).

WA 6: Write a problem-solution essay on some issue related to cyberspace. Length 4-6 pages (1,000 - 1,250 words).

You must also keep a journal in which you record your initial ideas for papers (including the ones that don't work out) and responses to some of the readings. Your journal will be for you alone; for this reason, I will not be collecting and grading these journals, but I be giving you regular assignments to do in your journal. If you write regularly in your journal, your final papers will be better.

A third type of required writing will be for you participate in the class computer forum at least once a week (preferably more). You will have to go to a computer lab somewhere on campus in order to connect to the newsgroup, unless you have a modem on your computer and know how to use it. This type of writing is part way between personal, informal writing done in your journal and the public, formal writing of your finished papers. It is an opportunity for you to respond to the works of others in your own class and in the other section of English 104 that I teach (both sections will use the same newsgroup). I have more to say about these different kinds of writing in the course pack.

I will determine your final grade as follows:

Writing Assignment 1 10%
Writing Assignment 1 10%
Writing Assignment 1 10%
Writing Assignment 1 10%
Writing Assignment 1 15%
Writing Assignment 1 10%
Computer Forum 15%
Attendance and Participation 15%
  100%

Attendance is required; normally you should have no more than three unexcused absences throughout the term. More than six absences can seriously jeopardize your chances of passing the course, regardless of your grades in other areas (unless you have a very good reason for your absences, which you have discussed with me). More than four unexcused absences will result in grade being lowered by a whole letter point (from a B to C, for example). I will count an absence as excused for the following reasons: (a) required field trips for other classes; (b) participation, not merely attendance, in university athletics; and, up to a certain point, (c) illnesses for which you have a doctor's excuse (if you are seriously ill for an extended period, it may not be possible to continue with the class). In the first two cases, you will need to provide a letter or note from the department (the Athletic Department or another academic department) that requires your absence from this class. If you know you must miss a class, try to inform me about it in advance. Remember that you are responsible for making up all the work you have missed. It is especially important not to miss conferences in which your writing and that of the other students is discussed.

You are required to do your writing on a computer for this class. I encourage you to use the computers in the English Computer Writing Laboratory in Rooms 11 and 12 of the Psychology Building, but if you have access to another computer that is more convenient and is adequate to your purposes, you may use that one instead. If you are not familiar with these computers, you must attend a computer training session in the lab some time during August 30 to September 3. You should register for a training session by going over to the computer lab some time on August 26 to 30 (Monday through Friday of the first week of class), the earlier the better.

Revision Policy: The grade you receive on the final version of a paper will be based on both your first and final versions of the paper. You may revise the final version of a paper if you hand in the revision within one week of receiving the graded version back. After a paper has been graded once, you may revise only once more. The new grade will be based on the first and most recent version of the paper; it replaces the earlier grade you received.

Plagiarism: This is representing as your own someone else's ideas, words, or phraseology. Please note that it involves not just copying someone else's words, but also their ideas, without giving proper credit. This is a serious academic offense; the penalty for it is receiving a failing grade on the work in question. You must then do the work over again on a different subject. In other words, don't plagiarize.

Textbooks and other Materials: The required texts are as follows:

bulletThomas, Gordon P. Course Pack for English 104, Sections 22 and 25.
bulletSpiegelman, Art. Maus I: A Survivor's Tale: My Father Bleeds History. Pantheon, 1986.
bulletSpiegelman, Art. Maus II: A Survivor's Tale: And Here My Troubles Began. Pantheon, 1991.
bulletVitanza, Victor J. CyberReader. Allyn and Bacon, 1996.
bulletWiesel, Elie. Night. Bantam, 1982.

A good college dictionary.

A box of paperclips.

I also recommend that you buy the following book or share it with someone else:

bulletKatz, Fred E. Ordinary People and Extraordinary Evil. SUNY P, 1993.

These materials will be available at the University Book Store, but they may not all be there the first week of class.

Important Dates: We will try to follow the schedule shown below. Any changes will be announced in class. You are responsible for knowing what those changes are.

August 26 Introduction. Sign up for a computer training session August 23-27.
August 28 Computer Training in the English Computer Writing Lab, Psych 11 & 12 (this will be training in using e-mail, newsgroups, and the WWW, not word processing).
August 30 Computer Training continued in same place. Writing Assignment 1 announced.
September 2 Labor Day Holiday. NO CLASS.
September 3 (Last day to add course or change course section without special permission.)
September 4-6  
September 9-11  
September 13 Final draft of WA 1 due.
September 16 Library Orientation. Meet in library.
September 18 Library Orientation.
September 20  
September 23 (Last day to withdraw without penalty of recorded "W")
September 25-27  
September 30 Editing conferences on WA 2.
October 2  
October 4 Final version of WA 2 due. Begin work on WA 3.
October 7-11  
October 14 Editing conferences on WA 3. Columbus Day. Classes do meet. (Beginning of midterm week.)
October 16  
October 18 Final draft of WA 3 due. Begin work on WA 4.
October 21-25  
October 28 In-class conferences on WA 4.
October 30 Conferences on WA 4 continue.
November 1 Last day to withdraw from a course or the university.
November 4 Final version of WA 4 due. Begin work on WA 5. (Advising from spring semester begins.)
November 6-8  
November 11-13  
November 15 Conferences on WA 5.
November 18 Conferences on WA 5 continue.
November 20 WA 5: Editing concerns.
November 22 Final Version of WA 5 due.
November 25-29 Thanksgiving Break. NO CLASS.
December 2-6 Registration for spring semester begins.
December 9-11  
December 13 Final version of WA 6 due (you can also make arrangements to hand it in during exam week, provided that it's not later than the last day of class).
December 16 Last class for Section 22, 1:00 - 3:00 pm. This is Monday of exam week.
December 17 Last class for Section 25, 3:30 - 5:30 pm. This is Tuesday of exam week.

The last class meeting will be during the time scheduled for a final exam in this class, if there were a final exam.

Last edited September 4, 1996.