“The Way to Wealth”:
Benjamin Franklin’s Use of Audience Isolation as an
Instrument of Rhetoric
It is not up for argument that
Benjamin Franklin’s “The Way to Wealth” is a work of rhetoric aimed at
persuading all audiences to read and learn from the wise proverbs of the
made-up old sage, Richard Sanders. Of course the very premise of
Franklin’s introduction is to engage his audience with his proverbs through
an example of how they might be applied to real life. However, in his
attempt to persuade all, Franklin certainly finds it necessary to approach
different audiences with different types of rhetoric. Patrick Sullivan
catches onto this separation of readerships and divides Franklin’s audience
into two categories: the “least sophisticated reader” and the “more
sophisticated reader” (249). In his separation of the two, Sullivan
finds that for the former group the preface becomes more literally a
“convenient collection of proverbs,” whereas for the latter he explains that
preface works as a challenge to “engage the critical faculties” of the mind.
Most important for Sullivan is the conclusion that from this second, more
sophisticated audience, we can begin to see that the preface “is built
around the tension between the simple instruction offered in the form of
proverbs and the more sophisticated instructions generated by the dramatic
context” (249). The tension that Sullivan introduces here leads him
into an interpretation of the introduction as an important play between the
forms of literal pedantry and complex symbolic meaning, which seems to align
Franklin’s bifurcated audiences into a parallel sense of collective
importance.
However, by examining this “dramatic context” that separates the two
audiences from each other, it becomes apparent to the removed (in the sense
of time) reader that in the preface Franklin is in fact seeking to persuade
his more sophisticated and mature audience to actually separate themselves
from the common crowd, and in doing so truly learn from his proverbs. While
Sullivan briefly touches on this element of audience division in his
discussion of Franklin’s rhetoric as a combatant of “mental laziness” (255)
and a promoter of “intellectual independence,” this essay will seek to
examine more deeply the way in which Franklin aims particularly at the
audience of intellect and uses them and them alone as his target audience.
Evidence of this separation comes throughout the preface as Franklin
introduces irony, hypocrisy, and downright dull-wittedness into Poor
Richard’s proverbial maxims that he is prefacing. All of these elements
create a theme of contradictions to the introduction and seem to be placed
only where a more attentive readership would be able to catch them, that is,
under the surface.
To be sure, with each incongruous piece of information about Poor Richard,
Franklin’s sophisticated reader distances further and further from the
audience that would take Franklin’s proverbs at face value. As a result,
his attentive audience is isolated into a realm of higher understanding as
the readers themselves become a part of the inside subtlety that Franklin is
crafting. Therefore, in this introductory essay we can observe an excellent
example of Franklin carefully disguising his most meaningful arguments deep
within the text and asking only a select few to do some digging and pull
them out. Finally, what I hope to explore in this essay is the method that
Franklin uses to create this type of rhetoric and why this type of narrative
espionage is so important to Franklin and other writers of the 18th
century.
To begin, the fact that Franklin would employ the rhetorical device of
audience isolation in “The Way to Wealth” is not uncharacteristic of his
other writings. Sally Griffith finds that Franklin uses a similar method in
an essay he wrote as far back as in the winter of 1747 – 1748 entitled
“Order, Discipline, and a few Cannon.” In this particular piece Franklin had
set himself to organize a “voluntary citizens’ militia to provide for the
colony’s defense” (131). Griffith finds that Franklin’s primary rhetorical
strategy relies on the creation of an “intended audience” that would become
the sole aim of his essay (144). Contrary to “The Way to Wealth,” yet
equally important, Franklin’s persuasive aim is leveled at the middle class
colonists as they are the very people who will need to be rallied for the
militia. Griffith explains, “Franklin insisted that his intended audience,
‘we, the middling People, the Tradesmen, Shopkeepers, and Farmers of this
Province and City,’ stood to lose the most, being less able than the wealthy
to flee and more likely to lose all they own; indeed, they would bear the
brunt of tributes extorted by their conquerors.” While its is interesting
that Franklin focuses his argument on the middle, rather than elite class
(similar to the intellectual elite in “The Way to Wealth”) in “Order,
Discipline and a Few Cannon,” it is also fascinating that he keeps his
arguments focused towards the class system altogether. Griffith touches on
this idea as she writes,
He [Franklin] was clearly making a calculated appeal to a nascent class
consciousness…. Yet this rhetoric also channeled class resentments in the
interest of unified action. Franklin suggested that because traditional
elites had neglected their civic duties, it was the right and obligation of
all citizens regardless of station to play a significant role in community
life.” (144)
From Griffith’s sharp interpretation here, we can see Franklin clearly
playing on class tensions as he uses the resentments of the middle class as
a catalyst towards changes throughout all of the hierarchies of his
society. What is most important for Franklin’s rhetoric to be successful is
the existence of a stratified society altogether. For, without
stratification, to focus and aim a narrative at a particular group of people
would of course be impossible. Additionally, while “The Way to Wealth” is
certainly not a piece that Franklin would have intended to cause class
resentment as seen in his essay above, Griffith’s findings are illuminating
to Franklin’s consciousness of the power of splitting audiences and focusing
rhetoric.
Moving to “The Way to Wealth” in particular, we can immediately
see a division of audiences in the first paragraph of the preface as
Franklin appeals to the more analytical reader by exposing Poor Richard’s
major flaw of vanity. Poor Richard states,
…for
though I have been, if I may say it without Vanity, an
eminent Author of
Almanacks annually now for a full Quarter of a Century, my Brother Authors
in the same Way, for what Reason I know not, have ever been very
sparing in their Applauses; and no other Author has taken the
least notice of me, so that did not my Writings produce me some solid
Pudding, the great Deficiency
of Praise would have quite
discouraged me. (Franklin 785)
An
attentive reader is able catch on to the contradictory nature of Poor
Richard’s character at once, as it is laughable that he attempts to lament,
“without Vanity,” his lack of fame and attention both of which might have
actually satisfied his vanity. To add to this, Poor Richard goes on to say
in the second paragraph, “I concluded at length, that the People were the
best Judges of my Merits.” Thus, Poor Richard confesses that after being
rejected by a more “learned” class, he decides to look for “Satisfaction”
and “Praise” in the less learned and more common “People.” As we will see,
the subtle contradiction of Poor Richard’s character that Franklin begins
with here sets the stage for an entire narrative that seems to cater to a
more analytical and less literal readership; especially a readership who
would not be fooled by a man who must call himself an “eminent
Author.” Moreover, with the second quote, Franklin is playing
with the idea of Poor Richard himself having two audiences, one being the
“learned Author” and the other the more common people. Therefore, similar
to Franklin’s more sophisticated audience, Poor Richard’s learned audience
seems to be wary of the authority of the almanac’s proverbs as well as
Richard himself.
With
the sarcastic tone of the narrative established, Poor Richard then moves on
to relate an incident with which he was much “gratified.” The reader soon
realizes this incident to be another example of Poor Richard’s vanity as
Father Abraham, after being asked by a crowd to explain what he thought of
the “Times,” begins to expound
many of Poor Richard’s proverbs word for word. While the proverbs are
useful to the people listening to them, there is very much a sense of irony
in Father Abraham’s teachings as he relies almost entirely on Poor Richard’s
sayings. Sullivan finds Father Abraham to be a “comic figure” who is
“unable, it seems, to complete a single sentence without recourse to Poor
Richard” (251). Therefore, with Poor Richard’s rather pitiful display of
vanity and Father Abraham’s mechanical reproduction of Poor Richard sayings,
it would seem ridiculous for any analytical reader to accept the preface as
an argument towards blind adherence to the Poor Richard doctrine. Rather,
it seems that Franklin is allowing for room to criticize or at least examine
the deeper meanings of his proverbs and how they might be applied to an
individual person. The fact that only an active (as opposed to passive)
reader would be able to catch these subtleties suggests that Franklin is
urging his more sophisticated audience to absorb the subtle clues being laid
before them and thus separate themselves from the more literal readers.
Throughout Father Abraham’s reproduction of the proverbs, the
contradictory elements of Poor Richard and his sayings still humorously
entertain the more sophisticated readers, while also instructing them to
think for themselves. Very early in this section, Father Abraham, playing
off statements of discontent expelled by the crowd, asks, “So what signifies
wishing and
hoping for better times” (786).
Finding nothing to signify such pessimistic idleness and errant yearning,
Father Abraham goes on to say, “We make these times Times better if we
bestir ourselves” and ends the argument with a Poor Richard’s saying: “Industry
need not wish… He that live
upon Hope will die fasting.” The proverb offered here seems to
be a direct judgment of Poor Richard’s own hoping and wishing for
recognition as an “eminent” writer. And to a more attentive reader, Poor
Richard’s decision to be happy in the merit he receives from the common
people would definitely materialize as a contradiction to his theory of
industry. Moreover, the sophisticated reader would have no problem
imagining Poor Richard starving to death out of his idle dreaming of fame.
Similarly, during his speech on frugality, Father Abraham uses proverbs of
Poor Richard that again appear to be aimed directly at his (Poor Richard’s)
lamentations at the beginning. Father Abraham states, “… for
Pride that dines on Vanity sups on Contempt,
as Poor Richard says…. And after all, of what Use is this
Pride of Appearance, for which so
much is risked, so much is suffered? It cannot produce Health, or ease
Pain; it makes no Increase of Merit in the Person, it creates Envy, it
hastens Misfortune” (789). An attentive reader cannot read this passage
without thinking back to Poor Richard’s consolation in “solid
Pudding” to assuage his lack of
praise and even his apparent envy of those authors who “find [their] Works
respectfully quoted by other learned Authors” (785). Edward Gallagher finds
similar conclusions in this section as he explains that “Since the tenor of
this section militates against the satisfaction of pride, it radically
conflicts with Poor Richard’s desire to gratify his Vanity” (482).
Furthermore, he states that this section undercuts the “expectation fostered
by Poor Richard’s attitude at the beginning of the essay.” Therefore,
Franklin’s use of this section to further expose Poor Richard’s hypocrisy
demonstrates his desire to urge his sophisticated audience to resist even
the subtle foolishness of Poor Richard himself.
In
examining the proverbs that make up the body of the preface and the majority
of the entire work (or the actual almanac), Charles Meister explores
Franklin’s use of the proverb itself as a tool of rhetoric. He explains,
“one might ask what rhetorical functions are generally served by the
proverbs he [Franklin] quotes. To be sure, any proverb usually tries to
vivify a concept or give a mental picture of an argument or of an ideal
social conduct” (161). Meister’s definition of the purpose of writing
proverbs altogether seems to apply to both audiences (less and more
sophisticated) that have been examined above. For the less sophisticated
audience, a proverb could merely be a mental picture or example of what
exemplifies virtuosity and the life of a “good” citizen. In terms of the
more sophisticated reader, Franklin’s proverbs represent a symbol through
which enlightenment is reached on a symbolic rather than literal level.
Furthermore, Meister expands this definition to encompass the most
simplistic of Franklin’s proverbs to include those that “carry practically
the sole burden of proof of an argument” that Franklin had been advancing
(162). Thus, even without the obvious contradictions in Poor Richard’s
character that have been observed above, there still exists single proverbs
that seem to indicate an overall sense of ambiguity within their meaning.
And this serves Franklin’s rhetorical strategy well, as Franklin would have
clearly known that many readers would not sense the ambiguities of the
proverbs and would end up missing their deeper meanings altogether.
Within
the preface this element can be seen when, in commenting on making a payment
in the form of credit, Father Abraham quotes Poor Richard as saying, “Creditors…
have better Memories than debtors” (789). As Meister has
pointed out, the point of this proverb is apparent with no additional
explanation (even though Father Abraham takes the opportunity to add his own
wisdom). But it is the simplistic nature of the maxim that would have made
it problematic for the sophisticated reader. This same reader would find
the saying quite silly if it were to be applied to someone who, through good
business sense, used a loan to make a sound and profitable investment. That
a contrary condition such as this was left out of the direct narrative of
the preface indicates that Franklin meant the sheer simplicity of the remark
to be intended for a reader who would actually get the point. Therefore, as
Franklin uses the contradictions of Poor Richard throughout to persuade his
sophisticated audience to split off from the crowd, we also see a similar
development here as Franklin uses the proverbs themselves in the body of the
piece to focus his rhetorical strategy on his more attentive audience.
Finally, it isn’t till the conclusion of the preface that
Franklin uses both the common people and Poor Richard to focus his argument
on his sophisticated readership. In the last paragraph, as Father Abraham
ends his “Harangue,” Franklin does the unexpected by having the listeners
approve “the Doctrine,” and subsequently practice the “contrary” (790). By
showing the way in which a common person would react to Poor Richard’s
proverbs, Franklin challenges his more mature audience to separate
themselves from such a reading and use their intellect to learn from the
wise maxims. This idea is furthered when, in another shocking development,
the reader finds that Poor Richard himself had gone to the market to buy a
new coat and upon hearing the speech of Father Abraham, decided that he
could stave off his vanity and “wear my old one a little longer” (790). In
showing even Poor Richard learning from the proverbs he himself had written,
Franklin again pushes his readership not to fall victim to the same folly as
Poor Richard does. He suggests, rather, that they take yet a different path
than any of the people presented and use “Experience
as a dear school” and to remember that one must always hear “Reason”
(790). This lesson of using experience and reason before depending on “Advice”
from others yet again throws in another contradiction to Franklin’s
proverbial passages. But as before, this message is subtle and was most
likely intended for only the more sophisticated of his audiences. The
preface is finally ended when Poor Richard states “my Vanity was wonderfully
delighted with [Father Abraham’s speech]” and exclaims in the final line: “Reader,
if thou wilt do the same, thy Profit will be as great as mine.” Thus, the
undercurrent of contradictions and messages stays neatly tucked into the
weave of words, available only to those who know where to look for it.
Cameron Nickels touches on Franklin’s toying with the character
of Poor Richard in the conclusion of the preface and finds that “Given the
inexorable direction of Franklin’s intentions in the preface, the conclusion
can perhaps be anticipated” (87). She goes on to say, “Poor Richard can
quote himself with gravity, but until reminded by Father Abraham, even he
had blithely ignored the substance of his proverbial wisdom…. if we recall
the advice from the 1756 almanac: ‘When you incline to have new Cloaths,
look first well over the Old ones, and see if you cannot shift with them
another Year.’” Thus, we can almost see Franklin laughing as he wrote Poor
Richard into the preface as doing quite the opposite of his proverbs by
“inclin[ing] to have new Cloaths.” The message to his audience is of course
clear: it is acceptable to chuckle a little at Poor Richard’s own fallacy,
but find the lesson within the humor and truly learn from the proverbs.
As can
be seen, Franklin’s use of audience isolation becomes an essential element
in his overall persuasive power. The influence of his rhetorical strategy
did not receive a blind-eye in his own time period. In fact, several of his
contemporaries (and close friends) often used a similar line of attack
towards their audiences. Most notably, the persuasive strategy undertaken
by Alexander Hamilton, James Madison, and John Jay in
The Federalist Papers, published
about thirty years after “The Way to Wealth” in 1788 and 1789, is decisively
similar to Franklin. The connection between Franklin and this group of
political activists was both personal and professional. Nian-Sheng Huang
notes that Jay and Franklin worked together on numerous projects including
negotiations with Britain (79) and also finds that after Franklin’s death,
Madison praised the statesman by saying that “Franklin was ‘an illustrious
character, whose native genius has rendered distinguished services to the
cause of science and mankind in general; whose patriotic exertions have
contributed in a high degree to the independence and prosperity of the
country in particular” (27). Thus, as Franklin was an influential character
in the general history of the United States, he was also an integral person
in the lives of these and other political men. And this can be directly
applied to the rhetorical strategies of this time period.
In his
discussion on the rhetoric of The
Federalist Papers, John Longaker finds that the authors of the
piece “talk of a plural ‘we,’” in their discourse on “a politically,
economically, and ideologically unified group working towards a common goal”
(95). However, Longaker finds this “unify[ing]” approach to be misleading
in the Papers as he states, “Needless to say, however, the apparently
inclusive ‘we’ of early American Federalism actually masked the exclusion of
many people.” The many people that Longaker explains were left out of
American Federalism and were subsequently masked by the “ideological and
rhetorical” use of “we” included nearly all of the under-represented class,
race, and gender groups. He argues that the primary rhetorical strategy of
the Federalist Papers was to
make a “disparate group identify with a singular identity” and thus allow a
unified nation to rally around a strong centralized government. The primary
similarity between this type of argument and Franklin’s in “The Way to
Wealth” can be seen in the way that the
Federalist authors use a analogous strategy of layering their
argument and aiming it at a particular audience. For the
Papers, the argument is aimed at
persuading the classes of people not of the hegemonic sect in an attempt to
persuade them to “support the dominant class” (95). And as Longaker points
out, this creates, in the “early print agora” of Franklin’s time period, a
type of rhetoric “only open to a certain type of people speaking in certain
ways about certain things.” This appears surprisingly akin to Franklin’s
use of audience isolation in his own rhetorical strategy, as he similarly
masks the truer aim of his piece within the narrative. And in both of the
works, the role of the audience and the intent of the rhetoric are
intrinsically intertwined to enhance the persuasive power of the writing.
With all of this considered, it is apparent that the type of persuasive
writing that Franklin mastered in “The Way to Wealth” was an important
influence on some of the most significant rhetorical writing of the founders
of the United States government.
By
using two layers of meaning in “The Way to Wealth,” Benjamin Franklin gives
both the unsophisticated reader and sophisticated reader a workable preface
to a book of proverbs. Aiming directly at his sophisticated readers,
however, Franklin also displays the correct way to read
Poor Richard’s Almanack. He does
this by pushing them to separate themselves from a literal reading and use
their own reason and wit to examine the proverbs before applying them to
real life. And, as discussed above, it is this type of rhetorical strategy
that influenced many prominent writers in the colonial period. All this,
however, is not to say that Franklin felt the less sophisticated readers
were unable to use his doctrines. Rather, “The Way to Wealth” is merely
evidence to his excellent command of audience and furthers his reputation as
one of the most effective American rhetoricians. By the preface alone, the
modern reader both learns some important maxims to leading a productive and
happy life and gets a lesson on how to use audience to create an excellent
piece of rhetoric.
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