Phil Druker/Department of English/ University of Idaho

 

 

 Phil Druker / Department of English

Summary Samples:

Weak (the author describes the article rather than summarize):
1) Chepesiuk, R. (2005, January). Decibel hell. Environmental Health Perspectives, 113. A35-A41.

This article focuses on the growing problem and cause of noise pollution.  It explores the effects of population growth, urban sprawl, and the increase of traffic and aircraft prevalence on noise levels.  This article offers specific information regarding decibel measurements and risks of prolonged exposure.  The author provides specific decibel levels for a variety of machines and situations. 

I plan to use this information in the final report section dealing with health risks caused by high noise levels. <evaluation

 Better: (the author summarizes by providing key details):

2) Chepesiuk, R. (2005, January). Decibel hell. Environmental Health Perspectives, 113. A35-A41.

            This article provides information on the growing problem and causes of noise pollution.  Population growth, urban sprawl, and increases in traffic and aircraft transportation are having a marked effect on noise levels.  Escalating decibel levels and prolonged exposure increase the risks to hearing and health.  In the United States, 30 million employees are vulnerable to the possibility of hearing loss because of hazardous noise levels on the job.  Children and animals are also at risk to the physical effects of noise, such as stress, elevated blood pressure, and increased heart rate.  Various decibel measuring machines are available for various situations.  In conclusion, the article shows that  health and hearing risks due to combined decibel levels and extended exposures occur in everyday life. 

            I plan to use this information in the final report section dealing with health risks caused by high noise levels. <evaluation