Phil Druker / Department of
English
Summary
Samples:
Weak
(the author describes the
article rather than summarizes):
1) Chepesiuk, R. (2005, January). Decibel hell. Environmental Health
Perspectives, 113. A35-A41.
This article focuses on the
growing problem and cause of noise pollution. It explores the effects of
population growth, urban sprawl, and the increase of traffic and aircraft
prevalence on noise levels. This article offers specific information
regarding decibel measurements and risks of prolonged exposure. The author
provides specific decibel levels for a variety of machines and situations.
I plan to use this information in
the final report section dealing with health risks caused by high noise
levels. <evaluation
Better:
(the author summarizes by providing key details):
2) Chepesiuk, R. (2005, January).
Decibel hell. Environmental Health Perspectives, 113. A35-A41.
This article provides information on the growing problem and causes of noise
pollution. Population growth, urban sprawl, and increases in traffic and
aircraft transportation are having a marked effect on noise levels.
Escalating decibel levels and prolonged exposure increase the risks to
hearing and health. In the United States, 30 million employees are
vulnerable to the possibility of hearing loss because of hazardous noise
levels on the job. Children and animals are also at risk to the physical
effects of noise, such as stress, elevated blood pressure, and increased
heart rate. Various decibel measuring machines are available for various
situations. In conclusion, the article show that health and hearing risks
due to combined decibel levels and extended exposures occur in everyday
life.
I plan to use this information in the final report section dealing with
health risks caused by high noise levels. <evaluation
