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Comma Splices and Fragment Sentences

Comma splices and sentence fragments are two basic punctuation errors that you should NEVER have in any of your documents.


Comma Splice

Do not join two complete sentences with a comma.
 
Wrong: The timber industry is cyclical , anything that increases economic dependency on it would decrease economic stability.
Wrong: Select the proper abstract, then a page will appear.
Wrong: Plagiarism is handing in work that is not your own , it is dishonest.
Wrong: The design uses a 31-stage LFSR, the layout is illustrated in Fig. 5.

How can you correct these sentences?

  1. Change the comma to a period.
     
  2. Combine the sentences with a conjunction
    bulletand
    bulletbut
    bulletso
    bulletyet
    bulletfor
     
  3. Use a semicolon.


Fragment

Do no write incomplete sentences.

Wrong: Although these facts are correct.
Wrong: Because the nature of the system is complex.
Wrong: Being a superior force in the league.
Wrong: Which is important to their gaining our support.
Wrong: Made up of the sum of all the propagation delays in the feedback path.

What can you do to correct these sentence fragments? There are lots of possibilities. But note that each case, the thought is incomplete. Sentences need to state a complete idea.

  1.  Although these facts are correct, the conclusions are wrong
    (I added a clause to complete the thought.)
     
    These facts are correct. (I deleted the subordinator, “although.” You can start sentences with any subordinator, but you need to combine clauses that include a subordinator (dependent clauses) with a clause that stands on its own (independent clauses).
  2. The delay is made up of the sum of all the propagation delays in the feedback path. (Here, I needed to add a subject that tells what is made up.)


 

 

 

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